Billy Elliot is the main character... The story doesn´t tell much about the physical characteristics of him, but we know that he is 12 years old, athletic and light. Billy likes jiggling around with Nan (his grandma), he loves music and the ballet lessons. In the past he learned football tricks. He didn´t stop practicing the football exercises till he was perfect in doing that. This special patience in doing movements till they are perfect is what some people call a tick. But that´s why he is becoming excellent in ballet.
On the other hand he hates boxing and his teacher grumbles, because he is dancing in the boxing ring. He doesn´t like violence and fighting.
I like the character, because he is not like other boys, who love fighting and other sports e.g. football, handball, boxing...but I think he could be more self confident and it would be better if he gived his opinon what he likes and dislikes.
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hey hey
AntwortenLöschenjust have read the first impressions.. and i don't want to be rude, but if you want to make your texts more interesting, i would advise you to write longer and more exciting sentences.
you'll see it will appeal more..
lovely greetings
Laura
Sometimes I think the sentences are not used up. But I like very much that you made so many pictures! nice done :D
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